will this be offtopic for my speech?

[peter]

so for my first body paragraph, i talk about Marco Polo's early life. I mention that his mom died when he was young and that his relatives took care of him. I said that his dad and uncle left when he was very young. Would it be offtopic if i talk about what his dad and uncle did, like how they got to China and met Kublai Khan and got the letter and them coming back and mentioning Marco again?
I knwo some people thinks that the story of him isnt true, but what if it is. Will it be offtopic?

 

[SimpleyLeilani]

hmmm, try to ask an english teacher?
or someone in an a higher grade who is smart?
it doesnt sound that bad to me?
well, good luck.